portrait portrait
2016/06/24 22:44
高中/英文   
主  題: 出  處:其他
題目難易: 中等
這是100學測作文 還煩請老師批改 I'm a solitary young man in late thirties. Dying to escape from solitude as a single man, I decided to attend a masquerade. For being attractive enough, I was dressed up elaborately. When I walked into the place, the atmosphere filled with excitement struck me because I've never been in the presence of many people. At that moment, nervousness was bursting with my vessels. Just as I tried to calm myself, a girl came into my sight. "So gorgeous, she's my type." said to myself. However, so paralyzed was I that I could even hardly move any of my fingers. But I finally plucked my courage to talk to her. After a short talk, I got the way to contact her. I was determined to have her a surprise, so I follow the address she gave me and bring my guitar to place as a result. With stars to gleam, I let out my voice louder and louder accompanied my guitar. All of a sudden, some of the residents there some up and let out mean words to me. But I didnt see the girl. I saw an old woman dwelling in the address the girl gave me instead. Is she the girl met at the ball tonight?" With question left in my mind, I took to my heels to go home. From that terrible experience, I fear make friends with girls that way. Yet, I still have a strong mind to pursue a girl. And I believe there must be the very girl out there for me.
(原作者於 2017/06/15 03:31 重新編輯過)
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